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Two Hands






When two hands join ~

love prevails between lovers,

society unites barring differences,

God listens patiently.












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Prompt: Picture B

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  • Desire gold member
    July 28, 2008
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    Welcome Back!!

    Beautiful Your piece qualifies and elated to see You backBest wishes in my contest Sweet Soul!!
    and much love & light~ Desire~*~

  • Desire gold member
    July 23, 2008

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    Thank You!!

    Thank You for Your entry: Two Hands
    This piece tugged hard at Spirit and while I was reading which I do several times~ Images come to me in many forms~ I kept seeing a flag wave and seeing what appears to be an Embassy-
    also being shown a lake- and a small pier type boat dock...Hearing phrase: Your ship has not come in yet
    but seeing a vessel on the horizon- For some reason being shown a flower, petals opening in sequence as the Light shines down Whether metaphor or symbolism
    Hopefully that makes some sense...
    Excellent take on the prompt in 15 words~
    Powerful images & message You have brought forth

    Thank You for sharing Your Heart also Spirit!
    Best wishes to You in the contest Sweet Soul
    **Judging will be done shortly...
    Many blessings too
    and much love & light~ Desire~*~


  • mysticstorm gold member
    July 21, 2008

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    A wonderful write of unity in so few words...lovely meaning and thoughts in this write...and I love the closing line...what a wonderful view on this prompt...
    best to you!
    Love,
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