prayers messaged
upon wings of grace
aside with strength
heavenly tears
sharing kisses of hope
Author notes
PROMPT:
Contest Picture B
found upon photobucket.com
15 words
Dedicated to Kevlon, a friend of mine in Inverness,Scotland, who is having to undergo skin and lymph nodes biopsies for possible stage 2 Cancer.
A contest entry
- - Speak to Me in 15 Words XXX - by Desire.
700 points, ended July 23, 2008, 15 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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This is fantastic!
Love the lines
"heavenly tears
sharing kisses of hope"
touches deep!
Congrats on the HM!
and love
Nettie
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Lovely Sis-Star
You shine bright the hopes, wishes, and prayers of healing here.
I find this to be sincere and to the point.
I love the heart that resides within you of great compassion.
May he recover, and good news be heard.
Peace, bro Timothy
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Thank You!!
Thank You for Your entry: Kissed Prayers Wished
This piece tugged hard at Spirit and while I was reading which I do several times~ Images come to me in many forms~ Love the words: upon wings of grace- also heavenly tears For some reason hearing reference to: Mother Mary and seeing hands upon Heart- a rose I am being shown as symbol of purity- color is white Also wild as it may sound seeing an octopus in the water- gliding along- and reference to snare- like something trying to ensnare it - After reading again being shown a turtle but the shadow like the underside of this turtle as if looking up and seeing shape through the water- Strange as it sounds I'm also hearing phrase: Through the crucifixion and resurrection of our Lord Jesus Christ, You are so here by bound and being given word: Scotland- as if something is attacking...I'm being shown open palms with petals of white roses- as *elixir* for healing- also getting words: *dust to dust*- Also word: Mother- seeing a silver heart- what appears to be a picture frame with a picture in it and name: New England
also color: orange- Spring favorite season- Hearing phrase: New Life- I'm actually getting image and phrase: Trust in the Lord Honey
Whether metaphor or symbolism
Hopefully that makes some sense...
Excellent take on the prompt in 15 words~
Powerful images & message You have brought forth
Thank You for sharing Your Heart also Spirit!
Best wishes to You in the contest Sweet Soul
**Judging will be done shortly...
Many blessings too
and much love & light~ Desire~*~
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Sis, this is so beautiful and full of soft comfort and deep emtions from the heart...what a lovely write for a friend, inspired by such a lovely picture...Best to you always
and Blessings to Kevlon...prays on the way...
Love,
sis
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A beautiful piece of compassion, and hopeful wishes. Very well penned in so few words, also giving the image its own voice. Nicely done - best wishes in the contest!
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