Moments of recluse
distant from your voice,
drift wisps of relief,
fluttering gossamers,
glad to stretch their
intrepid wings
devoid of threats
of being clipped.
Author notes
the picture found at photobucket.com
A contest entry
- Delightful Evening Quickie by delightfulmess.
450 points, ended July 21, 2008, 10 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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wow...each word so wonderfully penned..composed and perfected to make a poem worth so much more!...lovely write..i love the play on word .."wings devoid of threats of being clipped"..wings like the words that is spoken so distant...that can still be heard..wonderful..
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Thank you so much for your kind words...glad you like the poem
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devoid of threats
of being clipped.
perfect freedom we wish
thanks for sharing
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you are very welcome..
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A wonderful thought of freedom seeked
given in poetical views
best wishes to you
Julie
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Thank you very much for your warm wishes
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Your imagination soars!! This is a beautiful penning ......
God bless!
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Thank you so much!
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Wow, this was a fantastic write lol congrats on your trophy lol
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Thank you so much!
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Congrats on the HM!
Freedom, with no restrictions..how wonderful! A stunning little piece, very well penned
Congrats on the HM 
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Thank you so much dear
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Awwwwww This is really great I did enjoy the read congratulations on your hm it was very well earned have a great day
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Thanks for your words and wonderful comments dear!
lots of them...
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Oh how great to stretch wings without threat of being clipped! Excellent!
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Thanks dear...may your wings always soar!
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i really like your take on this, nice imagery, lovely worded.
glad to stretch their
intrepid wings
devoid of threats
of being clipped.
nicely done!
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Thank you so much!
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Wonderfully imagery throughout here. Very well penned indeed. I cannot even outline a certain line - I really enjoyed this from start to finish. A very well spoken piece, with great detail. Best wishes in the contest!
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Thank you so much for your encouraging words and wishes!
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OOOOh this is delightful.
I so enjoyed the phrasing "intrepid wings"
Excellent job here and thank you for entering my contest.
Delila
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Lovely work here as always my friend!
Good luck to you in this contest.
Always a pleasure to read you!
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Woo! Delightful your imagery ... beautiful use of wisps ...
heheh
Love intrepid wings as well ... niiiiiiiice.
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Best of luck!!!
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Thank you!
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