I see a mirage,
Woman in white,
Heal me...
"Thou art healed"
Thank you, Angel
Author notes
Chose picture D, it was most appealing to me...and I chose the title Healing Vision actually because of the poet's name holding the contest...it's my favorite song on Dance Dance Revolution, and the artist's name is DE-SIRE...so it was kinda funny, that and the image brought it to me...please don't count off on that desire...
A contest entry
- - Speak to Me in 15 Words XXX - by Desire.
700 points, ended July 23, 2008, 15 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Thank You!!
Thank You for Your entry: Healing Vision
This piece tugged hard at Spirit and while I was reading which I do several times~ Images come to me in many forms~ and I need to check out this Dance Dance Revolution- Sounds invigorating
Love the first line- I see a mirage- breathes images into the reader's mind and I was seeing mist- but also a manifestation~ and seeing toxins in the body rising through the crown chakra- into the Universe- cleansed the person of negativity Also seeing a snake around a man's neck as if he is doing a dance with this serpent- Whether metaphor or symbolism and nooooooo I won't count off on the coincidence of the other artist's name
Hopefully the images makes some sense...
Excellent take on the prompt in 15 words~
Powerful images & message You have brought forth
Thank You for sharing Your Heart also Spirit!
Best wishes to You in the contest Sweet Soul
**Judging will be done shortly...
Many blessings too
and much love & light~ Desire~*~
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Full of love in the end, short and sweet and truly meaning full. I really enjoyed this poem, to think that there are angels that can heal. Truly a great take on the picture. Keep on writing, until you can't no more!
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