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In Lap

Hands collapse.
Bible open in lap.
Glowing power from prayers hands.
Jesus faith, God understands.

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Its a Poem.... JackReed3.....

A contest entry

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  • Desire gold member
    July 23, 2008

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    Thank You!!

    Thank You for Your entry: In Lap
    This piece tugged hard at Spirit and while I was reading which I do several times~ Images come to me in many forms~Love the line: Glowing power from prayers hands~ for some reason getting a reference to word: indignation ...that word kept coming to me while reading Your verse - Whether metaphor or symbolism
    Also was seeing images of dove taking to skies but a hunter waiting in the brush shooting down the Messengers
    Hopefully that makes some sense...
    Excellent take on the prompt in 15 words~
    Powerful images & message You have brought forth

    Thank You for sharing Your Heart also Spirit!
    Best wishes to You in the contest Sweet Soul
    **Judging will be done shortly...
    Many blessings too
    and much love & light~ Desire~*~


  • KayJay
    July 21, 2008

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    It's a statement of faith, not just a poem... Well done Jack... this is definitely excellent!
    Ken