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Rainclouds

A storm over my prayer,
With birds in flight,
Can only mean
God cries too.

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  • Desire gold member
    July 23, 2008

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    Thank You!!

    Thank You for Your entry: Rainclouds
    This piece tugged hard at Spirit and while I was reading which I do several times~ Images come to me in many forms~ Love the first line: A storm over my prayer After ingesting Your words I kept seeing moving clouds but reference to over dry land begging for a taste of Life- water-...and how in some parts of the world- it has become a unwelcomed Gift...Regarding reference to birds in flight, for some reason I was being shown doves- leaving from all directions as another precious Life closes his or her eyes physically but Spirit soars within the changing wind - The last line I kept getting how unfortunate when a Human has more than what he or she needs- and still wants more at the cost of another Life (irreplaceable)- to get it Whether metaphor or symbolism
    Hopefully that makes some sense...
    Excellent take on the prompt in 15 words~
    Powerful images & message You have brought forth

    Thank You for sharing Your Heart also Spirit!
    Best wishes to You in the contest Sweet Soul
    **Judging will be done shortly...
    Many blessings too
    and much love & light~ Desire~*~


  • Catie Sheeran gold member
    July 20, 2008

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    Sad, yet strong...good luck