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I saw your face.

Missing image

In a quiet chapel

I sit just one

and light a candle

for you my son.

I know you're here

as I say this prayer

lord give him a hug

'cause I can't be there.

Then a candle flickers

before my eye

and I wondered why

I could not cry.

Then I felt those arms

in a strong embrace

and in my mind

I saw your face.

Happy birthday

I said to you

and you smiled that smile

I always knew.

When you released me

from that needed squeeze

I felt much lighter

and more at ease.

 

 

 

 

I look up to you!

 

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  • Cynthia Gaines gold member
    August 10

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    A beautiful memorial, yet so very sad...

    Congratulations on the silver, even though teardrops fill the shiny cup with sorrow. My sincere condolences to the family. Peace & Love Always, Cyn


  • stavykm gold member
    July 21

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    Oh Wow

    This just took my breath away. Now as tears stream down my face in a beautiful way. Thank you, thank you so much for writing this beautiful poem for my contest in which is a difficult one at that. This poem is just perfect. His smile and I could feel his strong embrace, for I loved him so. You are a beautiful poetess with a talent to write excellent poetry, your loving compassion has truly touched my heart. Thank you for entering and wishing you the best in the contest.
    Wishing you many blessings
    Much Love
    Kelle Marie
    stavykm


  • Gwenevere
    July 21
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    A beautiful poem full of comfort.I am sure that this will be really appreciated.Well done, Ros


  • Pure Thought silver member
    July 20
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    Well said


  • Cannonsfire silver member
    July 20

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    Oh this is sweet and sad, you bring tears my friend Love, C


    • Lady Ireland gold member
      July 20
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      Yeah i know it's sad,
      but imagine how it is for her.
      god bless.
      dolores xx
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