Dark tempestuous veins
flowing heavy ruby-red.
Extracting vile weakness
pulsating openings bled.
Devastated M’Lord nay
‘tis desires of night sots.
Draining each tart drop
b’ fore thy bones rot.
Canst thou feel m’ fangs
planted jugular deep?
Whilst sweet ecstasy so
vile causes thee to weep.
Cry nay more; m’ dearest
For thee shall be mine.
Hence, forevermore until
infinity runs out of time.
Author notes
second option: "Darkness seeps in shadows"
"from the journal of a lady vampire"
Dedicated to my Lil'AP brother Wayne Leom Learmond
who is leaving allpoetry...............novy
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A contest entry
- Darkness reigns over AP by daviscth.
2700 points, ended August 3, 2008, 26 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Vampire Poems! by hazeleyedfreak.
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Comments
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its amazing
i love the darkness that comes from it -
The rhyming is fantastic! PERFECT dark write
Love love love it -
Different, but Amazing!
I liked this alot!! It very different from any other I have read and I must say it is one of the most unique! Thank you for entering and Good Luck!! -
Great stuff!!!
Hey Novy,
Loving the darkness here...
Great use of Olde English,
Great narrative rhythm & flow...
Well penned, well versed, well done!!!
When I saw a fellow 'DD' here, had to pop by & say good luck in the contest...
Take care,
Fritz..........
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A wonderful creative poem
I can feel her, and hear her saying these words in my head.
Best wishes and good luck in our contest
Julie -
I think you did a wonderful job with the prompt. The imagery is awesome and the picture is too. Thanks for posting.
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I really like this, captivating. Great job.
~Oka/KC -
I love this. So very very dark, classy, stylish and wonderful. I found the atmosphere in this incredible too. I love the language used in this, and I am very very humbled that you have dedicated this to me. Thank you so much Novy. You have touched me deeply my Sister.
Darkest
Love to you
Wayne Leon
xxx
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This is so dark, and bewitches me. It has an eerie, enchanting feel to it, mainly because of the language. The use of "m'" instead of "my" is a very interesting chocie, and gives the poem character.
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