With canopied greenery
and unfurled moonlit evening
my dreamy hazel thoughts scent.
Amidst whispery calmness,
moments get unbalanced
as you step in with beauty yawns.
Winds become warmer
with blazing passions
by us, the playful lovebirds.
With cocooned togetherness
along enwrapped longings,
we make love with sparks
and time stands still.
Looking at us
and our lustful acts
as we float in wavy ecstasies,
the moon blushes and winks.
Author notes
Option... B
A contest entry
- Just Let Go And We'll Make Love by ChaosIntoArt.
385 points, ended September 30, 10 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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I loved it. You painted a very beautiful picture. Amazing job and good luck in the contest.
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nice
it does reflect love very wonderfully
great job
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This is great, very passionate. A nice love poem that is kind of gentle but conveys some passion at the same time. I really like it. Thanks for entering!
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This is passionate, sweet and romantic...So soft ...I really love this
Lynda
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I love this, my friend
The metaphor flows softly, as it playfully takes us on a sweet journey into subtley erotic romanticism. Very good
Best of luck in the contest
Dee
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