Powerful
And
Protected
Soaring above all
Freely
With such
Bravery
I envy to
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Author notes
15 words
option A
A contest entry
- - Speak to Me in 15 Words XXX - by Desire.
700 points, ended July 23, 2008, 15 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Be kinder than necessary, for everyone you meet is fighting some kind of battle!
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Hood-Winked!
The Eagle is such an majestic and amazing creature! I so love to watch them flying overhead it brings such a sense of peace within. Amazing write full of wonderful imagery and emotions. Just beautiful
Theresa
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HOODWINKED !!!
You have written a meaningful poem, reaching out, relating to nature which surrounds us. Seeing the freedom and safety of the soaring Eagle and desiring this for yourself is understandable. Oh to be free and rise above our present circumstances! Well written poem.
You have been Hoodwinked by the Poetic Bandits today because WE CARE!
Dennis
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Hoodwinked
A beautiful piece, I enjoyed reading it. Strangely enough I can actually relate to this piece. You have powerful words to go along with the picture. Beautiful write keep it up.
Always write from the heart
Never give up
Kate
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Thank You for Your Time!!
Thank You for Your entry: Soaring
This piece tugged hard at Spirit and while I was reading which I do several times~ Images come to me in many forms~ I was counting the words again and still got 14 in which this contest calls for 15- Sorry You couldn't make it back in time to fix
this is a Gorgeous entry and I wish I could have given it a Trophy or HM but in the future there will be a pre-write contest
When I read Your words I kept feeling much Respect You had-still have for these priceless Creations- and that a part of You connects- I kept being shown half and half like You are here also there-whether metaphor or symbolism- if that makes sense- Love the last 4 words for they are Powerful in energy-
Hopefully that makes some sense also...
**Please credit Photobucket in the AC- Thankies so much
Excellent take on the prompt ~
Powerful images & message You have brought forth
Thank You for sharing Your Heart also Spirit!
Best wishes to You in the contest Sweet Soul
**Judging will be done shortly...
Many blessings too
and much love & light~ Desire~*~
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Oh My~
I'm still reviewing entries and noticed while counting...it appears You have 14 Words...Need one more word it seems...
I'll be back- I'm still reading and won't finalize until the afternoon- which I mentioned on the contest page- I just started to read completed pieces now...
Be back
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You expressed your self very well in this poem. I like the way that you understood the picture. It is well done.
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How beautiful your words are...I do believe we all have a moment in which we envy and wish to be free to fly and be how we are...strength and power in your words...
Wonderful work...
Best to you!
mystic
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This is great sweet goodluck in the contest we all wish for something or somemone to belong to great take much love alwyas
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I search to belong too! To be free and strong.. we will get there sweetheart! Stirring 15 words
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strong words make this strong piece...great write and good luck
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very beautifully created and such a thought to be as them.
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Michele this is amazing. Very well done, I wish you the best of luck.
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This is very beautiful and a wonderful
thought for this picture prompt. I am
sure that we have all wondered what it
would be like to live as one of these
awesome creatures. They are all so
inspiring, moving, and most of all just
wonderful additions to this earth.
Beautiful work here and good luck to
you with this one in the contest!
Jeremy0826
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