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what he caused

He said he loved me
He said He cared
The lies he told
it made me flare

I wanted to kill him
For the pain he caused
For the deep slits
in my wrist

The blood it dripped 
evrey time i thought

my heart it chipped

It squirmed in need

 

only saying

"take the chance

go back to him"

i ignored

 

I tried

but my voice gone

couldn't utter a sound

 

He asked me out again

heart screaming "YES"

head screaming "NO!"

Not knowing what to say

 

The words i spoke

"No i can't deal with the pain

you put me through

i don't hate you

but i don't love you"

 

 



 

Author notes

HAHA THIS GUY IS AN A** HOLE!!! I DON'T TALK TO HIM NE MORE!!!

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  • edit my world.
    July 24, 2008

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    this is a lovely write...sometmes it seems a lil cliche...but eh break ups usually are for whatever reason.
    i did like this loads ^_^
    thanks for entering chicky
    Dani♥


  • xXmidnightstarXx
    July 21, 2008

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    I like the flow of this a lot, and the ending words on each line, they just seem to fit right in place. I <3 it bunches!