wayward son, having lost direction
afraid of returning home
sees a light shining brightly
welcome
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A contest entry
- - Speak to Me in 15 Words XXX - by Desire.
700 points, ended July 23, 2008, 15 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - - Go for the Gold XVII - (Pre-Writes...That's Right) by Desire.
700 points, ended July 28, 2008, 6 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Welcome Back!!
Beautiful
Your piece qualifies and elated to see You back
Best wishes in my contest Sweet Soul!!
and much love & light~ Desire~*~
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Wow, I really liked this write.
It's very inspiring and hopeful
to the heart and soul. Well done
here my friend and good luck to you!
Jeremy0826 -
Thank You!!
Thank You for Your entry: surely heaven waits for you
This piece tugged hard at Spirit and while I was reading which I do several times~ Images come to me in many forms~ Love the words: wayward son- also reference to the fear of returning home which I kept getting there are many unsure of the *unknown*- also how media depicts the transition I'm being shown a hearse for some reason and hearing name: Grandmother- also reference to did not fear for Father was there to greet- from what I was seeing Father- appeared to be her Father- after reading Your words again- I kept getting he died when she was young- Whether metaphor or symbolism
Hopefully that makes some sense...
Excellent take on the prompt in 15 words~
Powerful images & message You have brought forth
Thank You for sharing Your Heart also Spirit!
Best wishes to You in the contest Sweet Soul
**Judging will be done shortly...
Many blessings too
and much love & light~ Desire~*~
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beautiful and perfect for this...so few words yet sweet powerful words.
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I knew it!!! I knew you'd come up with something brilliant and you didn't disappoint. Gosh I wish I had such talent.
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hurry up lol I can't wait to see what masterpiece you come up with hehe I know it's gonna be good!!
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