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Rest in Peace

Shadows fall around me
as the wind chills the air
and this fear of my surroundings
take my breath and make me gasp
for air.

Chills crawl up and down my spine
my mind starts to go blank
my pupils dilate
and my heart pounds
like a thousands hoofs.

I move and my bones ache
I try to see and I am blinded
lost in this wilderness of darkness
lost in this world of hate.

I shake
my hands go numb
me feet freeze in place
scared to death
when trying to run
from death tonight will
be a race
one that I will not be able
to keep up the pace.

I try to scream but my throat
is so tight
I try to cry but my tears
are dried by fright.

I turn the corner as
i try to exit the door
one touch from you and I am
on the floor.

I see that you have finally had enough
to much to drink
to much to handle
lost in your hate
and my life is the one
that's left for the gamble.

I never thought that loving you
would be a loosing game
and neither did I know that our
wedding night you would kill in shame.

I look back now after death
when I have peace
that night of our honey moon when you
came home and you killed me.

I never though that when I said
I do that would mean that I
have my life taken by you..

 


...........Rest In Peace..........

Author notes

Some times those you love are the ones that only want to hurt you.....sometimes love isnt meant to last.

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  • Spiritual Soul
    July 22, 2008

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    wow this was intense, I loved the flow, I couldn't read fast enough, cause every word just seemed to fall perfectly into place after the other awesome write! Thanks for your entry!
    Blessings,
    ~Michaela~


  • Jeb
    July 21, 2008

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    Damn

    Another excellent write! I really, really, like this one. There are a couple of spots that need to be touched up, words like "me" instead of "my". But overall this is a damn good poem! And your author notes are so true. Sad but very true. Once again you managed to completey pull me into you poem. Great job!