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Loner!!

My wings are broken
And I keep falling...
Destiny has spoken
I was never meant for flying...
I stop my struggle
To fall, fall into the rubble...


I do not know sunshine
Because I cannot let go
Of proper ways - a rigid line.
Be free, I want to.

Though, can I?
No, perhaps never, says I...


A few times, bliss I found
In thinking my saviour dear
Will break the thread with which I am bound...
I was bound, I fear, for far too many years
And to cut them, I alone, cannot find shears...


Come , will she
My saviour?
Nay, says me.
She is but my dream fervour...
And I am meant forever

To be this loner...

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(C) nosgoth, 2008

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  • dillpickle62
    July 25, 2008

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    Bummer!

    this well written poem is a bummer. Grabbing the emotions of your readers. Very good! You got an Oh...jeez out of me at the end.