Okay you landed one lucky shot,
and I was saved by the bell.
Mom says get it while it's hot,
I say follow the nasty smell.
I assure you they will be back,
can't sleep without a winner.
I'm glad you're stuck with Jack,
beans and kraut for dinner.
Oh big bad blue I'm just playin',
some friendly fun that's all.
Actually what I'm really sayin',
I'll rock and sock that jaw.
You can try again and again,
just push that big head back in!
Author notes
One of my favorite toys of all time!
A contest entry
- Toy Inspired Poetry by AddenLee.
482 points, ended July 31, 2008, 6 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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hey one my friends had this toy.. I loved it.. but it was his not mine.
You did a great job with this poem.. I love it.. brings back memories. good one though. I love this poem so much.
good luck my lover
kat
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haha, freaking amazing toy and piece. I was hoping for more from the childhood, but still this piece makes me laugh and brings back memories of my sister and I. Great on the description and great on capturing the toy, but could use more on childhood.
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