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Tonight

Tonight m just thinking of you...
The feeling of u makes me so different..
The thought of u makes me so fresh..
The presence of u gives me joy n cheerfulness..

I feel you are my happiness..
you are my beloved..

 

Tonight i just think of all those days you stood up me...
All the time you defended me...
All the happiness n love you gave me...
and how your love & trust changed me...
How it helped me to be a different person..


Tonight the feeling of you makes me dance..
Dance like a free angel...
With a heavenly joy on the face..


Tonight i just wanna say one thing...
M so delighted n pleased to have you..

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(C) nosgoth, 2008

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  • dillpickle62
    July 25, 2008

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    Ah...?

    So that's chatspeak? I've seen it listed on not wanted on contest's but never new what it was. hahaha... old school I guess. Anyways beyond that i was digging the poem.


  • aeolia
    July 21, 2008
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    What's with the chatspeak? It seriously detracts from teh poem and looks really unprofessional.


    • nosgoth
      July 22, 2008
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      thanks for the comment. Will avoid those next time..