I snuggled with
memory’s snapshots
when life was filled
with simplicity
and sincere happiness.
Under the sizzling sunshine,
we sat in silent appreciation,
until soft words touched
our lips, sparking a love
that has yet to be forgotten.
I recalled these snippets
of my past with fondness
of the special moments
that give me hope
for the future.
Author notes
Words in order used:
snuggled
snapshots
simplicity
sincere
sizzling
sunshine
silent
soft
sparking
snippets
special
A contest entry
- ~ Summer Word Bank ~ by Frozentearz.
525 points, ended July 27, 2008, 12 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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I really like the title of this, and how it fits with the poem. This is beautifully done, the wordbank really complements the piece, blending with the poem rather than standing out on its own.
Well penned.
~lost
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It flows as if you weren't forced to use those words, I wouldn't be able to tell without the authors notes, well done!
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This word bank has really brought in some wonderful poems and this one is no exception. Great usage of the bank. Thanks for entering and best wishes,
Frogz~ -
great use on the word bank i must say, it is a wonderful short poem to say the least. trully a work of art if i must say so myself
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Another great usage of the word bank
you have given hope for the future,
Thanks for joining in warm thoughts.
frozentearz -
preserving the past... so well done... yet, i am SO looking forward to moving into the future... and leave some of this past behind me. like the new pic too
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I like it!!! What a great word bank - and you really made a great poem out of it!
It felt so warm, and snuggly, and summer-y. All four of the poems I've read tonight have made a smile blossom on my face, and now it reaches ear to ear.
I really love this new side of you!!!
(Maybe you could teach me a thing or two!)
Great job and good luck (I'm sure you'll win!)
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