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I sensed rain.

Missing image

The sky bubbled

clouds

swept the tops

of trees

and I sensed rain

in my mind

which seeped

through my eyes...

And as each cloud

erupted into another,

a chill came

and froze my heart.

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  • Poet Muse
    July 30

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    Beautifully written...

    I love this dark beauty, or as Leon Uris said it, this is "a terrible beauty"


  • Cynthia Gaines gold member
    July 24

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    Beautiful, yet so very sad...

    Melancholy thoughts came to mind while reading your chilling poem of the fearsome clouds... Great work, and glad you picked up another shiny cup in the contest!!! Take care, Cyn xx


  • AliceinPoetryLand Moderators member
    July 20

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    Oh how beautifully penned and wow what a sad ending.I love where you took this! Thanks so much for your entry
    Gaylene

  • Cannonsfire silver member
    July 20

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