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Breaking Free

pecking laborously away
at ivory walls of dismay,

breaking silently free,
the memories of you and me
nev'r forgotten, I decree

an escape within reach
tears no longer leach



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Remembering the Flight by Mihai82000 found at www.deviantart.com

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A contest entry

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  • Desire gold member
    August 8, 2008

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    Wow~

    This is a Beauty and Love the rhyme also the message You have brought forth
    The first two lines grab~
    Powerful-

    Excellent take on the prompt
    Thank You for sharing Your Heart and Spirit~
    Many blessings to You in all You do Sweet Soul
    Best wishes too
    and much love & light~ Desire~*~


  • Tam
    August 8, 2008

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    oooohhhhhhh....

    what pretty rhyme!! well done!
    this is lovely and what a surprise to discover a rhyming entry...thank you!!!
    I appreciate you sharing your time and talent with me.
    Blessings! Tammy


  • IrishGypsyRose silver member
    July 20, 2008

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    an escape within reach
    tears no longer leach
    Loved these lines the best but the whole piece is so thought provoking and emotionally charged that I had to reread it to take it all in. Great job. ~mandie~