A silent ghost,
In the wind.
Watching the waves,
Back and forth.
She is alone,
Lost and confused.
The sky,
Dark and cloudy.
The waves,
Ebb and flow.
The wind picks up,
And takes her away.
She is no longer there.
But in the wind you can,
Hear,
"Good bye..."
Author notes
I chose the picture, I really loved it, you know!? I actually used the word ebb, :3 I learned it in 6th grade! I really hope you enjoy this, I think you can tell I used prompt 1. If not, not my fault! Enjoy!
A contest entry
- Darkness reigns over AP by daviscth.
2700 points, ended August 3, 2008, 26 entries
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Comments
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*tear*.....it was so good it made me cry.
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Aww this is such a sad poem
You brought the image to life in your words
Best wishes and thank you for your entry
Julie -
LOL. I knew right away you used prompt one!! I really enjoyed this, you did it justice. Thanks for posting.
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