You break up with me and all I do is cry
And then
And then I cut my hair
Long, pretty locks of red streaked black
And now I can't concentrate on anything or anyone
Everything is a mess
I cannot speak,
and all I can do is make incomprehensible noise.
As a result they lock me away
Of my own volition, of course
I'm not safe breaking down like this
Lock me away, I'm breaking down
A contest entry
- This Is Me Breaking Down by Faerie.Princess.
500 points, ended August 15, 23 entries
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Comments
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This is a good poem, its strange how much someone breaking up with you can hurt, how much it can tear you apart and break down inside, and out i spose. great poem, i especially like the ending, it was powerful. good luck in the contest
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