yoke weak from lack of speak
I smoke my breakfast
while I walk on white
of eggshells
wallowing in
thin skinned
middle grounds
outside my sunny
A contest entry
- BLOW MY MIND! by Tam.
600 points, ended August 8, 2008, 16 entries
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Wowzers~
Now this is outside the box
Love the lines- I smoke my breakfast
For some reason I was having a Denny's moment
Excellent take on the prompt~
Congratulations on Your HM!
-Throws confetti-
Woooooooooo Hoooooooooooo
Thank You for sharing Your Talent and Spirit~
Many blessings to You in all You do Sweet Soul
Best wishes too
and much love & light~ Desire~*~
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love this out of the box style...
it gets me every time...
this is well done and I adore the final line...
you are always so clever with these picture prompts!
Thank you for sharing your time and talent with me.
Blessings! Tammy
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sounds like my yester years
i still remember them lol
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i'm smoking my breakfast right now...this was a great read for this morning. you are so good. i'll never quit sayin that. so- you burned the bacon and dropped ashes in your eggs?...not to mention the grounds in the coffee pot. no biggie. come on over and i'll fix you some pancakes.
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super cool. that's all the energy i have to say; but it's all that's needed; i dig it lots
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You always give me out of the box, I like that! Love, C
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