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Which Way

I take your hand in mine,
There's this special glint in my eyes,
Do you dare to come with,
Or do you wish to save,
Your very own,
Innocence?

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Ahh yea don't no where this one cmae from.. lol

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  • robforte
    July 31, 2008
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    wicked and fun!

    i love this!
    it's playfully seductive and still a bit mischievous.

    big clappies!


  • TyrannyForestFairy
    July 21, 2008

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    This was brilliant. Straight to the point with it's briefness and I like the daring nature of it within. Wicked!!

    ~Emily~ xx


  • Luckintheshadows
    July 21, 2008

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    ooooh...lovely! Short, and powerful, I love the daring tone of this piece...thanks for sharing,
    Luck.


  • daviscth silver member
    July 20, 2008
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    Thanks