Life is so cruel,
that it can be funny...
It's funny...
how change never changes
and same is never same
It's funny
how time goes only slower or faster
but is never just right
It's funny...
how the world can keep spinning
even when yours has stopped
It's funny...
how memories can fade
and yet they always stay
It's funny...
how mistakes in the past
are regrets in the future
It's funny...
how words never fail,
except when you need them
It's funny...
how the one you never want
is always the one you need
It's funny...
How there's so much to learn
when we still know nothing
It's funny...
How there are many souls on this earth
but not enough joy, laughs and smiles
It's funny...
how things can be happy, but false
which end being sad, but true
And it's funny...
how life can be soo cruel
that it becomes funny...
A contest entry
- Mistakes and Memories by whiterabbit..
380 points, ended August 28, 2008, 24 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
1 - 10 of 10
-
WOWWWWWW!!! holy CRAP you really have an amazing free verse ability. you create the type of poem that forces people to think and everything that you say is the exact truth. its so weird but really cool. you have a gift. like really. wow. oh yeah and i REALLY like the use of repitition.
-
real good
-
Life is cruel and funny i liked this it appeals to my humour.......
-
r u kidding me? it sucks!!
-
wow this is really great and there's soo much truth in it. I can relate to so many of these thoughts. I really enjoyed reading this. Thanks so much for entering.
-
Good use of the irony, keep up the good work
-
Great write! Good luck in the contest. ~Ľũčąś~
-
if life is such a joke then where aren't we laughing, i think i got that from a MCR song, but don't make it anymore true, keep it flowing and good luck in the contest
-
I personally think you did a good job. How you began and ended the poem. You used very real, emotions and events like how many souls yet how little happiness and so on. There are a lot of mistakes we make that are memories, like past mistakes, things going too slowly or too fast, not enjoying as much as we should. Good luck
-
not the best but o well..
Adding your comment:
1 - 10 of 10
