A newborn hatched,
enters the life of the living,
to be struggling now forever,
in a world so unforgiving.
Mother nature so clever,
the wonders of the song bird singing.
Author notes
Remembering the Flight by Mihai82000 found at www.deviantart.com
A contest entry
- BLOW MY MIND! by Tam.
600 points, ended August 8, 2008, 16 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Beautiful~
Aaaaaaaaaw this is a Beauty my Friend and Love the emotions this evokes
Wonderful weaving of rhyme!!
Excellent take on the prompt~
Congratulations on Your HM!
-Throws confetti-
Woooooooooo Hoooooooooooo
Thank You for sharing Your Heart and Spirit~
Many blessings to You in all You do Sweet Soul
Best wishes too
and much love & light~ Desire~*~
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I find this...
so sad and yet...uplifting at the same time...
what a wonderful way you have with words!
I love where the inspiration picture took your Muse.
Thank you for sharing your time and talent with me.
Blessings! Tammy
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Wonderful
Such a beautiful creation for the theme. So very well done. Best of luck in the contest.
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