You have been my ray of sunshine
that always chased away the rain
all your crazy jokes
always brightened up my day
You've seen me through bad times
took away my tears
brought me so much pleasure
throughout this past year
It brings me so much joy
you chose me as your friend
you've always gone that step beyond
been one on whom I can depend
We have shared so much together
weathered many storms
held each other tight
within loving distant arms
I write this little rhyme for you
with wishes true and sincere
may all your dreams be realized
throughout the coming years
I'm glad our paths have crossed
that fate brought you to me
it isn't goodbye that I say
but a warm farewell to thee
Author notes
Dedicated to my dear friend
~ WAYNE LEON LEARMOND ~
Wishing you all the best in your endevours
you have been one hell of a friend, I'm going
to miss you so much sweetie.
I love you dearly
Know you will be forever in my heart
Take care & be blessed
Darkest Love & Respect
Always Chelle xxx
A contest entry
- A Friend to Treasure by BluRosePoet8488.
1000 points, ended November 3, 2008, 30 entries
Honorable winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - ... Friendship ... by lost.and.alone.
570 points, ended March 15, 20 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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Aww this is really good.
I love the beginning
"You have been my ray of sunshine
that always chased away the rain
all your crazy jokes
always brightened up my day
You've seen me through bad times
took away my tears"
love it, great write.
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An absolutely wonderfully written descripption of a true friend. Sad in the end though. Thanks for entering. Keep the ink flowing and good luck!
~Donna~
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Good luck.
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A great definition of friendship
This is what I read in this poem. You have found a dear friend you can rely on, who is always there for you and whom you wish the very best. Well done. May this friendship continue forever.
Anna.
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this poem is so great! and it makes me sad but happy at the same time! it reminds me so much of me and my wonderful friends that will be parting so soon! and also one thing-it's "realized"
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Thank you for reading and spotting the boo boo...my spell checker didn't. Valued and appreciated. Although I do believe it can be spelt both ways
~sugar~
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man this poems makin me cry :'(
i can relate so much to this poem rii now...
i wish i had your talent
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Thank you so much for reading and commenting
Truly valued and appreciated
I'm sure you have got talent
~sugar~
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aww this is a very good poem, good luck in the contest, thank-you for entering
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I'm glad you did this!
He seems like a good guy. I wished that I had made a better attempt at getting to know him. I'll go say Hi! to him soon, again
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He is one of the best...A fantastic dark writer...you couldn't ask for a better person to be in your corner. This is one of the saddest days of my life.
I really appreciate you reading this
Love ~sweetness~ xxx
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I can't take it anymore
Sis this is stunning and perfect for Wayne
I'm sure he will be moved by your passionate friendship words.
(sniffs) ok, lemme go, I don't want for my eyes to get all red...so not attractive
Lovely
-ephiphany
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Sis I know the red eyed look is so not attractive, I've been wearing it for a couple of days
(sniffs) & (sniffs) again
Appreciate you reading sis and your wonderful friendship and support.
~sugarcookie~
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*frown*
Say it isn't so, sis. The Mater of Darkness is leaving us? If this is true, he will be sorely missed. A great dedication to a great friend. Good one, sis.
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Don't bro or you will get me started again
I am going to miss him. Appreciate you reading.
~sugar~
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A desperate emotions about the friendship showing the inner strength of goodwill..I love it...my thanks for sharing it...
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Thank you so much for reading and commenting. He will be missed. ~sugar~
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Luna-midnight, You want to take a good look at yourself for you to say such things and think so bad of a friend in a second...I would say that is how you are, full of deceit, trickery and the mirage of caring...because if you were a true friend...no matter how hard it is to say goodbye you would do it and wish them well not turn on them because their leaving doesn't suit YOU! -
Aww
we all adore Wayne Leon
He is my Brother of the Dark, I will miss him so much too hun.
He has been my missing link and we have shared so much together.
A wonderful dedication
Julie xxx
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He means the world to me.
Appreciate you commenting Julie
~sugar~ xxx
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Then you are going to miss out on some truly beautiful friendships...it takes a second to make a friend and a lifetime to be one. Whether they be near or far away.
Take care. -
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You are not the only one sweetie.
You take care
~sugar~ ♥
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A VERY BEAUTIFUL PIECE, INDEED - FROM A VERY BEAUTIFUL LADY!
Many people seem to be leaving AP these days - and for whatever reason that they may have for doing so - all we need to know - is that the times we spent with them - and the words that we read from their hearts and souls - will stay and remain with us forever - in the world - and into the world that will come after and beyond!
Peace & Love!
Earl.
Say FARE-THEE-WELL but as I said earlier today in me first piece of the day NEVER SAY GOOD BYE.
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You are a gem of a friend. I value and appreciate you to the max. No truer words have been said than those in your comment. Thank you hon for also always being there.
Love you ~sugar~ xxx
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hi chelle~
this is a really nice tribute to your friend.
I write this little rhyme for you
with wishes true and sincere
may all your dreams be realised
throughout the coming years
i like the rhyme approach. it gets your feelings across, leaving a comforting smile instead of tears. tears are ok, mind you! a comforting smile leaves a fond memory. well done, my friend!
tim
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Thanks tim
I'm glad tears are ok. Appreciate you reading and value your lovely comment.
~sugar~
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Take care Sugar. I can't write now, this has touched me very very deeply. xxx
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You're not the only one...take care hon.
Wishing you the very best
Love always ~sugar~ xxx
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