Don't know how it happened
last night I felt so pretty
today I want to die
The music so loud
the air way to hot
so were you
so was I
Told me I was beautiful
said I was alright
Believed every word you said
till you told me to go outside
I followed, still can't believe you lied
You wanted to get to know me
only in town for a few nights
we didn't have much time
you said you thought you loved me
I said it was getting late
you put your hand on mine
It went so fast from there
everything is just a blur
I never wanted it to be like this
But you said it was my fault
who was I to know?
I thought you said I was pretty right?
You punched me hard
told me to be still
I laid there and tried to disappear
when you finished you spit on my face
said if I was going to just lay there you wouldn't care
So I guess everything was a lie
I wish I could re do my first time
I wish that I would die
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This is so good. I wish I could re do my first time to.. 4 pills of xtc, I dont really like to think about it, I thought I loved him, now he doesn't even talk to me... I shouldn't have let myself be taken advantage of, but when I think about it, I couldn't have stopped it...
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That was unbelievabkle, I really really like it. Great job. I really like how in depth you got with the quote. Thank you for entering :]
I'm not sure if it is true or not, but it was written so well I believed it was. Good luck
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