Monarchy
And paper mache
Bits of glue taint and stain
Ink filled faces
Civility
And sweet-smelling pesticides
A Spreading concentration
Of second-hand thoughts
Superficiality
Needed just as much
As it is not
As we continue
clashing candy swords..
licking them away
Author notes
Candy, specifically sugar candy, is a confection made from a concentrated solution of sugar in water, to which a variety of flavorings and colorants is added.
- Wikipedia
Comments
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Excellent
I think this achieves a lot as a sensual poem - it works well on the senses with aromas and a very visual content. The imagery was excellent and really drew my attention. This is a thoughtful poem with a lot of originality.
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I simply love it...that has to be just the greatest
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thank you.. it holds a lot of meaning for me.
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