My life was dark and gloomy,
then you came in to my life,
you removed all the pain and hate,
you releaved all my strife.
You make me feel so happy,
i'm really, really glad,
to have met someone like you,
and not somone like my dad.
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This is wonderfully done Kate. Love the rhyme. You seem to have someone in your life that makes you feel happy. It's really nice to know. I hope that all things go well with you.
M. C. -
humm..not finished..yet it is finished with a definate throught..and wonderful emtion you have here...
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