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Crying Alone And Broken

A love that I once had
A love all-consuming
Which I believed would live forever
Perished in the rough ocean of time.

For she came to love another
And my joyful world came to an end,
And I cried alone in the dark
Like a little bird with broken wings.

I know there is no hope for me
And I patiently wait for poisoned death
To give me sweet release from pain.
Failing that, I'll go and have am enormous dump.
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Weep no more, for salvation is at hand - what do you think?

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  • abu nuwas
    August 28
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    Ha!

    Really sad and manfully covering it up? No way of knowing. Fun anyway.


  • leo2
    July 28, 2008

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    Thanks for the belly laughs. The exit line was classic. Life does have a way of boiling down to the basic bodily functions no matter how the brain tries to elevate its' purpose.

    Sincerely,
    Leo Long


  • no win no fee
    July 21, 2008
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    I was expecting something but I wasnt sure what. You didnt disappoint. xxx