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Feed My Will

I'll rip your heart out with my bare hands just to see you bleed,
Off the tortured looks of pain in your eyes my soul will feed,
I'll peel back your eyelids for you to watch your own heart beat,
I need to fulfill my desire for this demonic treat.

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  • Beauty Of Silence
    August 1, 2008

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    omgosh!

    this is such an angsty piece! it was so dark and sorta scary! but very well written! keep penning, spilling your emotions!

    AWESOME!


  • lowercase prelude gold member
    July 20, 2008

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    Holy crap. Somebody's angry.
    This reminds me of that saying "Hell hath no fury like the wrath of a women scorned."