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What True Lies Are Made Of

My eyes blur and glaze over
As my heart shatters onto the floor.
The knife digs deeper into my back,
Making me writhe and beg for more.

"It won't hurt..."

Blood trickles down my chin
Dripping and smearing across my chest.
You hear me cry out, yet you shove me down,
Further angered by my protest.

"You'll learn to enjoy it..."

Now I'll keep my mouth shut;
I won't utter a sound.
Just step down on me harder
And grind my body into the ground.

"It feels good..."

Let the glass slice me open-
Bleed me out to your heart's desire-
Just promise when you're done raping my mind,
You'll stop being a fucking liar.

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  • DarkSpirit-Girl
    September 4

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    Great write, love the first stanza. I swear I will fucking kill the person who did this to you. (and I'll enjoy it) : ) Xds-gX

  • oh wow, that is just truly amazing!
  • that last stanza was pretty amazing. this is perfect in so many ways... so powerful too.

  • OMG! WOW!

    Let the glass slice me open-
    Bleed me out to your heart's desire-
    Just promise when you're done raping my mind,
    You'll stop being a fucking liar.
    This is so POWERFULLY written. I could feel so many emotions coming through as clear as day. The imagery is amazing and your meter and flow are fantastic! Great rant and I feel for you. ~mandie~