Callous, like a scab
one that has been picked over and over,
sucking in that gut,
when putrid cellulite hangs below,
that piss stained waist band
Unattractive on so many levels,
did you really think
that sad excuse of facial hair
makes you a prime specimen of mankind?
Sporting enough breast for two,
wouldn't be surprised if those teats lactated
drops of pungent revulsion,
Heck, I wouldn't even date you!
Gazing lovingly into the camera,
the lens clouds over from slime and spit,
sprayed from your salivating, weak lips
there is only word to properly describe you,
and that most definitely would be,
'ick!'
Author notes
written 7/20/08 hope this contest cheers up your friend
A contest entry
- DONT BE AFRAID TO BE MEAN by Shydreamer3.
1150 points, ended July 20, 2008, 6 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
please leave comments,I appreciate the feedback
Comments
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hahahah!!! i loved this one i am not a big fan of rhyme but your stuff has me hooked and this one made me spit out soda... GREAT WRITE!!!
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I honestly didn't read any other entries for this contest .. i'm just reading them now .. i've been a little slow and busy with things today. Great job on this poem, I enjoyed reading it. We had similar thoughts which show between our writes, but we had different levels of creativity. NIcely done and thanks for your comment
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I loved it absolutely loved it you will be considered. one of my favs so far.
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