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wedding poem

when i looked into your eyes

i knew you were the one

your love caught me by surprise

although it was fun



you never had to guess

the way i ever felt

soon i was working less

to make your heart melt



now as we join hands

in this adventure to come

i'm so glad to be with someone who understands

and someone i truly love



you may not be perfect

but you're everything to me

i may not be evrything you'd expect

and i'm sure you agree



but for a couple who is as perfect as us

i can easily say

that i will never leave you

that i am here to stay

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  • Dreamana
    August 1, 2008

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    The idea of having someone who will always be there for you is reassuring. We all need somebody.

    Thank you for entering


  • Bosiarbooger gold member
    July 25, 2008
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    Very nice

    A very lovely wedding poem. I enjoyed reading it. Thank you, Boog

  • maggy1126
    July 25, 2008
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    This is a very cute poem... I love the part where you wrote
    you may not be perfect

    but you're everything to me

    i may not be evrything you'd expect

    and i'm sure you agree

    love is not finding the perfect person.. is finding your best friend is the whole world..


  • Ms. Nellie Bell
    July 21, 2008
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    AWESOME,POEM!