I would ride it to you
We would be together again
And nothing would matter
If I could
I would
If I could breath the fire
I would have saved you
From falling so deep
And nothing would matter
If I could
I would
If I could drink the Earth
I would give it to you
You wouldn't have left
And nothing would matter
If I could
I would
Author notes
This is about someone lost, someone who suffered depression and the girl who lost him is grieving. If she could have stopped her loved one from this, she would've. She would've gone to the ends of the earth to find the thing that would have kept him from dying inside. She knew what was happening, but it happened too fast for her to stop. I hope that everyone who reads this will read something a little different and feel something a little different. I hope that you will realize that this has happened
It has happened and I was the one who wrote this
A contest entry
- Quote prompt.... by Angelflower.
600 points, ended August 10, 2008, 17 entries
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Comments
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Awww. this is such a heartfelt poem.. It can be taken so many different ways.. You did a good job on the prompt.. I'm sorry for that loss.. Thank you very much for sharing this..Best of luck..
Ange
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Awe. What a beautiful ode. Simply adorable. I loved this. *love**star* -Mandi




