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If I Could

If I could ride the wind
I would ride it to you
We would be together again
And nothing would matter

If I could
I would

If I could breath the fire
I would have saved you
From falling so deep
And nothing would matter

If I could
I would

If I could drink the Earth
I would give it to you
You wouldn't have left
And nothing would matter

If I could
I would

Author notes

This is about someone lost, someone who suffered depression and the girl who lost him is grieving. If she could have stopped her loved one from this, she would've. She would've gone to the ends of the earth to find the thing that would have kept him from dying inside. She knew what was happening, but it happened too fast for her to stop. I hope that everyone who reads this will read something a little different and feel something a little different. I hope that you will realize that this has happened

It has happened and I was the one who wrote this

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  • Angelflower
    July 21, 2008

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    Awww. this is such a heartfelt poem.. It can be taken so many different ways.. You did a good job on the prompt.. I'm sorry for that loss.. Thank you very much for sharing this..Best of luck..

    Ange


  • Jade.Butterfly gold member
    July 21, 2008
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    Awe. What a beautiful ode. Simply adorable. I loved this. *love**star* -Mandi