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Gift

A drafty room with torn
blankets, broken windows
covered with plastic and duct tape
he checks his bandless watch again

Their cold breath puffs
to and fro as they share a bowl
of corn flakes, sweetened
with syrup and giggles.

He leaves for work
she sits in the chair
removes the broken combs
long red hair cascades to life

She stares into the ashen-colored
face where blush used to live,
the cracked mirror looks back.

Chop, snip, cut, onto the floor
goes the sacrifice made,
for the price of wigs

she buys the gift and 
waits at home with a bow
stuck to a watchband.

He leaves the jewelry  shop
with cash in hand,
and buys the pearl-laced hair combs,
money made from a bandless watch
he sold with a smile.


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Prompt: Love, kinda, sorta

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  • Amarige
    July 27, 2008

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    Beautiful piece..you picked great quote..thank you for joining and best of luck

    Ruby