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What Was


It only took a moment
To change the course of time
Keep wishing I could just
Back up and rewind,
But life is not a movie
That you can put on pause:
Back up, erase; Oh, No!
What was is just what was!





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  • maralisa gold member
    July 21

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    But life is not a movie That you can put on pause:
    Back up, erase; Oh, No!What was is just what was!wow wonderful poem if only we could erase and pause sometimes but when a moments gone its gone good luck in the contest my friend


  • MuddyKing gold member
    July 20

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    too bad we don't have a rewind, and then again we'd never learn from mistakes...thought provoking to say the least
    love the last two lines
    peace and hugs
    Muddy

  • Piccola gold member
    July 20

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    So true and you managed to show real life in perfect rhyme! Reminds me of a write I did a bit ago, about just deleting memories. I wish!
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