Unfathomable as the ocean deep,
Impenetrable as the ruby keep,
Mystery obscures once spoken lore,
In the haze of the forever more,
Time triumphant from cracks seep,
In the earth the forsaken weep,
On their pillows the dreamers sleep,
Harken to riddles the madmen implore,
Unfathomable as the ocean deep,
Haunting tune from violins leap,
Awestruck moon the serenade reap,
Mourn blabe bites through to wain light's core,
A scar that even the keep can't ignore,
From the shadows this knowledge will creep,
Unfathomable as the ocean deep,
Author notes
Your Prompt:'If You Could Ride The Wind, Breath The Fire, and Drink The Earth'
~ innocence forgotten..
This is an attempt at a Rondeau Form poem. Note to have has to revise the rhyming pattern.
HAHAHAHA wtf was that sentence
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ok maybe I will just simply start clapping again I am wowed I espcially loved
Unfathomable as the ocean deep,
Impenetrable as the ruby keep,
Mystery obscures once spoken lore,
In the haze of the forever more,
a brush of genuis
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Wow! I'm so impressed!! That's a great form and I just love what you've written here my friend!
It is haunting and holds a quality of forever searching for truths or paths....
LOVE IT!!!
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