i try to give you love but instead of responding
you just turn away
how am i supposed to say your my man
when even in public you don't understand
the meaning of expression
when we're at home
and we are all alone
you decide to give some loving
but instead i turn away
thinking of the day
when you turned away from me
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Wow that was really cool. Do you think you can look at my friend DarkAngel1's pag and comment on her poems if you can thank you. Please write back the answer. Thank You.
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yes i will comment on dark angels1
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aight
that's no problem at all!
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I think this is good, but i think it's unfinished. It sounds unfinished. I've seen these kinds of situations before, when people say they love you when you're alone but don't have the ability to say they love you in front of their friends and out in public. I know that it can be a bit annoying and that you'll feel a bit belittled.
If this is about life, make sure the person you're dating is actually in the relationship because they love you, not because they love your body.
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it is unfinished. i couldn't think of anything more to add to it. you know writer's block. oh yeah. This isn't actually a true story. i just put myself in that situation and wrote how i would feel about it.
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you're right
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