Waking up at dawn looking at your muscular hard body sending shivers down my spine
Fingers tracing down your thighs then feeling your manhood rise
I take in your scent touching you to hold you close against my flushed skin
electicity running through me feeling like I'm going to explode within
feeling breathless
Yearning
making me wet just thinking about where your hard meat is going
heat rushing through my body as my sweet juices start flowing
as your hands trace up to my warm wet treasure box between my legs
opening up my lips running your fingers over my button making me beg
for you to fill my voracious cavity
Yearning
yearning to feel your mouth on my sweet flowering bud
as I tingle inside out as the fire runs through my blood
feeling all pent up inside wanting some kind of release
body trembling waiting impatiently for you to give me a piece
I open wide showing myself to you
Yearning
Author notes
I do not claim the photo being used to being mine. Photo was done and owned by WAK
A contest entry
- erotic/sensual contest (adults only) by solitarytear.
600 points, ended August 3, 2008, 4 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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I need to stop reading your poems girl.....My dildo is starting to run slower and slower...LOLOLOL!!!!
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Excellent
Another intense and very erotic write. So very well done. Best of luck in the contest.
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Your sensual writes are so on fire! Love the visuals you choose to accompany your words...very enticing!
Blessings~
Az
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I love your style. This is a hot piece. You tlking my language now.
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Wow, this is such a great erotic
write. I love the passion and sensuality
here. Great job and good luck to you in
this contest! Keep it up!
Jeremy0826 -
what stimulating girl you are, it makes me yearn for you and all thingss you possess..my moods rised..so also hard mask struggling inside sweet..do share these things
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erotic sensual yearning
this is erotic sensual write
"I tingle inside out as the fire runs through my blood"
great line
love and light
Robert
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I LOVE THIS !!!!!!!!
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You described "yearning" very well! That made for a very interesting read! I enjoyed it.
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Very well done. Explict but with taste. I enjoyed this a lot. Best of luck to you.
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erotically hot ! i loved this i think you did a very reat excellent job good luck to you in the contest drippin chocolate
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Tis is some very enticing erotic writing...
feels more prose like then poetry..with the lengthy lines..but still of course I enjoyed the words, a lot
Hope you do well
Cindy
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Bringing a picture alive
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I enjoyed this poem, I've glanced at it several times today. I am concerned your verses may be a little lengthy. Other than this, I liked it.
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yeah -- very shivery!!
LOVE to hear you talk about yearning for that meat, and where it's going...! MORE!!
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wow.. very very hot.... u mak me wanna write supn hot n steamy n yea... lol
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Sticky n steamy
is what images are conjured up when thinking of this scene! wow, very hot indeed!
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Rich and sensuoul
My first impression? a well deserved erection!
Fave line; "making me wet just thinking about you" that always does it for me! dunno why I guess its the "thought" that counts...
good stuff girl!
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wow this is really good...had me yearning too
loved the rhyme, loved the repetition of "yearning", loved the flow, loved the imagery....i just loved it lol...great write!!! -
This is not personal this is a contest entry
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wow very hot, your man is lucky to have you
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