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Tipping the Velvet Rose

As she reclines offering up her rose
The time has come to kiss, her needs expose.
Her body laced with honeyed wine and lust
Now teases me with scents of love's dust.

As fingers trace the beaten path once more
I feel my knees as they caress the floor.
Her thighs embrace me pulling her lover,
The hidden place she keeps undercover.

A flush of heat as tongue and bud connect
The shimmy fires as love starts to collect.
A sweetness in nirvana's bond and chain
As slaves in carnal desire's grip attain.

My lips take possession and feast on flesh,
As teeth graze leaving her mind in a mesh.
The hunter has her prey now seeks to thrill
Leaving her senses to scream in shrill.

A caress glows as she floats in lust's craze
A smile as I stare in her eyes ablaze.
Tipping her velvet rose with lover's tongue
A pleasure in love I have often sprung.

Author notes

Author id: DLC-Jem

I love tipping velvet so well umm yes thats the reason behind it.

Why? To send a certain ladies lust into overdrive, I love you Ju.

Artwork: Unknown

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  • Veritas-
    July 20, 2008

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    That had a such a sensual flow, it makes me almost hungry! i appreciated the imagery used , very beautifully written. i like it alot , it has a great start and a great ending, 2 things that strike me the most!
    good work and good luck


  • The Poetic Angel
    July 20, 2008

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    phewwww lol awsome poem Jems Thanks You

    I Love You Jems

    xxx Your angel xxx

    Good luck in the contest