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Softly on the Lips

Softly on the lips
it was a perfect kiss.
Connected with a sigh
a muffled voice uncontroled
almost like a cry

Gentle is the touch
that leaves so little
but feels so much
It floats and settles
as softly as a feather.

As the sensation fades
I can only say
one word for now
and that word is
wow.

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  • I like WOW to describe a kiss. Wow is - good.
    This is tender and gentle. Very nice. ~Pamela


  • JennaSara-FreeSpirit
    July 20, 2008
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    what a wonderful sentiment
    you write beautifully