Next to a woman's smile...
Her hair is her trademark.
I love long hair
Falling over a woman's face
For it makes her body more alluring...
however
Short hair too...
Can be very sensuous!
It's all how the magic is used
for
All hair frames a woman's feautures
Short hair enhances dangling earings...
Long make a woman appear a temptress
It not length that matters...
It's how one sees a woman's beauty!
dragonheart1
Author notes
Hair enhances ones beuty but the heart wins out!
A contest entry
- tonight i draw your hair by Nicolette.
2200 points, ended August 6, 17 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Thank you for edits you’ve done. I take it you meant “sensuous” in the 8th line? You’ve captured the allure of a woman’s hair here in a simplistic and with an enthusiasm that seems to rise from your words. I especially liked the last line – indeed!
Thank you for this entry.
~ Nicolette
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A nice poem but with many spelling errors - i did say edit, edit, edit and no early posts in the contest rules. I'd prefer you work on this one some more....
~ Nicolette
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