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Just a nightmare..you wont like it DONT READ!

There, at the end of nowhere just where the emptiness of a cold night is, he's looking for a victim in the moonlight..
His teeth are ready to cut your flesh deep. His lips are waiting for your blood to paint them..
There, he stands hungry for a demonic kiss that will be your last one.
He'll hug you till you're breathless, and leave you to find a new bottle of blood
There, once upon a time he was waiting for a kiss to free him of this curse
And tonight he chose to sacrifice you and release himself forever
Tonight will be your last cause death chose you to be the next
Don't sleep this night or you don't have better things to spend your last night with?
Bring your pillow with you cause you'll spend this night in the grave of a cursed nightmare.


Now, wake up!!!! It's 8, you'll be late at work!

Author notes

The last line is so scarey
It's the first time I write a poem without rhyming at all and also the subject is not my style..I hope It won't make you sick..

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  • hoosiergentleman3924
    August 10, 2008

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    cool

    good write. enjoied reading it.  thanks for entering. let me know what is your style of write and I'll try to run another contest later that you can enter.       good luck


    • AnanCat
      August 11, 2008
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      Thank you so much...about my style:I think it's romantic sadness..sometimes hope..most of times it's about love
      Thanks for asking


  • dreamdragon6484
    July 24, 2008
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    cool

    not bad for a first time free write.
    keep on penning and good luck
    blessed be