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To My Darling



My sweetest love from heaven on earth,
be with me forevermore
You have given me a need to live,
and I thank you for the reason I’m once again able to breath
Your sensual kiss upon my lips, under the warm ambient sun,
awakens my senses that were once glum
Every tear cried has been diminished,
ever since you came into presence
I will sacrifice my life for you,
in every risk or hazard that comes into view
As we stroll in the dawn of the day,
my emotions and feelings for thee will immortally stay
I promise to stay faithful until the end,
my untainted love will never bend
Your embrace around me, makes my world turn,
and I will give you anything you demand in return
I will be your wife; you will be my man,
not one thing will ever fall into the realm of regret,
And under the midnight moon tonight,
I will mutilate your tender flesh just right



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  • HeartagramGirl00
    July 25

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    I was reading your poem and I kept thinking, "Awwwwweee!"
    Then all of a sudden I thought, "What? Hahaha!"
    I liked it.


  • DarkVelvet
    July 24
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    Absolutely stunning!
    Keep up the work my friend

  • Silvos. silver member
    July 20

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    That was definitely a twist. Going from such a beautiful poem, to mutilation. You definitely surprised me. Great luck to you in this contest, this poem fits it too perfectly.

    Silvos.


    • TyrannyForestFairy
      July 20
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      Finally!! At last someone knows what I was attempting to achieve with this composition. Everyone else has been saying that its really sensual and things like that yet they're not surprised about the last line with the twist (probably because they didnt even pay proper attention). Thanks heaps bro for actually reading and comprehending it and oh, commenting on it aswell I highly appreciate it.

      ~Emily~ xx

  • PrabhuDayal Khattar silver member
    July 20

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    Your heart is so much passionate while describing the whispers of love here in this verse...well done..and my thanks for sharing such a wonderful piece ...

  • Loki gold member
    July 20
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    Nice write, thanks for entering.

  • Chrysalis
    July 20

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    I found another awesome poem made by you. Last line was a killer so you ought to make it in the finalist! Kudos! Love this sensual piece. you've outdone yourself once again.
    blessed be
    Blanche


  • devils angel
    July 20
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    NAAWWW

    this is sweet n beautiful...

    i loved every line n the way it all flowed...

    Excellent AS!!!
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