Warm breeze,
blossom dances--
Summer snow.
Andrew Hide
08~01~2004
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Written January 8th, 2004
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yes the petals make a storm...very nice...PK
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Montreal Standing Ovation
WOW summer snow---what an image...with the warm breeze, as we get older do we see less of these days than when we were kids? Ponders on that trying to remember the last time he saw summer snow!
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Ah, a very nice haiku here. I like calling the blossoms "summer snow." Cool wording, and excellent imagery. Well done!
~Goldmare~
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Beautiful work, Andrew ... I loved this.
Take care, dearest Poet.
Myra
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paints a beautiful picture, and the background is great too, it is particularly good because its such a short haiku! six words but each one is made to count and the resultant image is so elaborate (for me at least) thankyou.
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Excellent Haiku.Very nice word picture.Like Haikumonk I remember the dandelion after blooms bursting in the summer breeze and snowing future dandelions all over my and adjcent lawns irritating my neighbors.Hope you have a healthy and happy New Year.bill
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Of course it's a haiku Andrew! lol..... so many people really don't understand haiku to this day.... going by high school teachers thoughts and principles. lol By the way... this is a nice one. I used to blow on a type of weed... a puffy one and it would burst into pieces of an almost lint.... and would snow to the ground. This reminded me of those childhood days. "summer snow" is a wonderful thought........ darn... I wonder why I hadn't thought of that yet........? lol
Don
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