Darkness is his only friend,
It keeps his terrible secrets hidden
Darkness is his only security,
It keeps him safe from this world
Darkness is his only way,
He can see clearly through it's hate
Darkness is his only drug,
Without it he is doomed to die
Darkness is his only hope,
He is easily blinded by the light
Darkness is his only source,
It gives him all the things he needs
Darkness is his only pleasure,
Within it he can cause his own pain.
Author notes
Criticism is always welcomed. Hope you enjoy this piece
A contest entry
- The Beautiful Dark by Spiritual Soul.
1300 points, ended July 22, 2008, 19 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - making you scream by snakeprincess742.
400 points, ended February 12, 23 entries
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Comments
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wow short sweet and to the point nice right -huggles- keep righting
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wow, this was great, I love the repetition it really helps intensify what your trying to say. Thanks for your awesome entry!
Blessings,
~Michaela~
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