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Full Green

I see the little-fingered pollyp,
green hovering in intersticial green
encapsulated and slipping
up the ages and vines,
sighing a promise for her mother,
to return when the flower fits the seed

Author notes

Dedicated to an aquaintance of mine who recently lost a child in the womb.
-and here i have the nerve to put words in a mouth; my appologies to those offended

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  • HeatherBell
    August 12, 2008

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    Beautifully written...evoking sadness and hope all in six short lines.
    Great use of imagery.Love it. can't think of anything negative to write about it.
  • Kechara
    July 20, 2008
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    Thank you.