Lie in shadow
As my heart drowns in the sea,
A bloody mess surrounds,
The body that is me.
Drowned in an ocean of salt,
That fell from my empty eyes,
A darkened drop on the floor
For every one of your lies.
I know that when you find me
My heart will finally be dead,
And all the floor around me
Will be a crimson red.
And I hope you feel the guilt
For the loneliness you gave,
The loneliness that sent me
To my early grave.
A contest entry
- Emotion of Darkness by Strawberry Wolf.
450 points, ended July 21, 2008, 21 entries
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Please tell me what you think
Comments
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whoa...thats dark and cold.
i like it.
im sorry about it if its true.
but if it is then look on the bright side....a really good poem came out of it.=D
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amazing! great write! the rhyme and form were great! good luck!
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That was perfect..loved the deep sadness in it,the flow,the rhyme and the painful end.
good work.
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