I'm writing a poem
To write a poem
Will it be ugly
Or will it let down?
I'm writing a poem
Because I care about you
I'm writing a poem
I'm writing a poem
Every second wasted
Is a second far too late
Every second wasted
Is me letting it go to waste
Will you promise me something?
Will you love me in the morning?
I think I know the answer
But I want to hear you tell
I want to hear your words
I want to hear your voice
Because its beautiful to me
I'm writing a poem
Because you wanted a poem
Is it that ugly
Did it let down
I'm just writing you a poem
Because I want to write you a poem
If it sucks, let it suck
If you like it, let you like it
I'm just writing you a poem
Nothing more than a poem
Let the words mean what you will
Because I've written you a poem
Author notes
For Rocio.
Sacrifice your Critiques unto me:
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This is cool.you don't care about anything but you just want to write a poem for someone you care for even if he may not like it or think it sucks and that is a special way to show how you care and not care at the same time.
you repeated "poem" 12 times in the 31 lines you wrote.
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^^;;
I guess a bit (lot) of repetition doesn't hurt every now and then.
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